*dies* My songs...

[Mysty]

*dies* I had a book full of my songs, and i lost it...XD... so i've decided to post song number 009, which i worte recently...erm... i'll doubt you'll like it, but we'll see i guess...

009-My Sweet Remembrance

I remember your gentle carress
Down the scars dug in my banck
A hand across a single wound
Cut into my skin with a tender knife

A slender finger traces
A sweet tear stained cheek
Another rough palm
Cuts my arm to shreds

Chorus
Its ironic
My sweet remembrance
Join me in
My sweet remembrance
Find me in
My sweet remembrance

My sweet remembrance is you

I remember your hand upon my chest
You could feel my dead heartbeat
To think that your stabbing hand
Was that stabbing knife that said my final prayers

Chorus
Its ironic
My sweet remembrance
Join me in
My sweet remembrance
Find me in
My sweet remembrance

My sweet remembrance was you

[Akion]

Originally posted by Mysty
*dies* I had a book full of my songs, and i lost it...XD... so i've decided to post song number 009, which i worte recently...erm... i'll doubt you'll like it, but we'll see i guess...

009-My Sweet Remembrance

I remember your gentle carress
Down the scars dug in my banck
A hand across a single wound
Cut into my skin with a tender knife

A slender finger traces
A sweet tear stained cheek
Another rough palm
Cuts my arm to shreds

Chorus
Its ironic
My sweet remembrance
Join me in
My sweet remembrance
Find me in
My sweet remembrance

My sweet remembrance is you

I remember your hand upon my chest
You could feel my dead heartbeat
To think that your stabbing hand
Was that stabbing knife that said my final prayers

Chorus
Its ironic
My sweet remembrance
Join me in
My sweet remembrance
Find me in
My sweet remembrance

My sweet remembrance was you

:eek: :eek: thats really good :eek: :eek:

lol me left speachless

[Angelz*]

very goods mysty ^^ *claps*

[Mysty]

Originally posted by Akion
:eek: :eek: thats really good :eek: :eek:

lol me left speachless

its not that good, XD

[Akion]

Originally posted by Mysty
its not that good, XD

lolz tis better than any of mine :P

mainly cause i cannot sing or think up a decent song to save my life, man that'd be a way to die lol

[Thaxul]

I like it, though i find it really hard to imagine the tune of songs when they are just written! :p

[Mysty]

Originally posted by Thaxul
I like it, though i find it really hard to imagine the tune of songs when they are just written! :p

lolz...wells, i'm glad you like them...and i found all my old songs...so here is number 001!!!

This is a song sung by a guy and a girl... and its kinda crap too!!!

001: The Sacrifice is Me

[Verse One]
Girl:This is a sacrement
This is a sacrifice
This is a moment not to forget
This is my time

Lad:This is your time to drop down
To feel the fires of hell burn and
This is your time to lie down
On your death bed screaming

Screaming

[Chorus]
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Sacrifice her and no one else, hear her
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Take her down and condemn her of her sins
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Watch the fire tear her down, its her last time now
Girl:Sacrifice me...

The sacrifice is me...

[Verse Two]
Girl:This is the last step I shall walk
On this earth, no other place to fall
This is the last blood drop to fall
Down to be devoured by hell

Lad:This is your time to drop down
To feel the fires of hell burn and
This is your time to lie down
On your death bed screaming

Screaming

[Chorus]
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Sacrifice her and no one else, hear her
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Take her down and condemn her of her sins
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Watch the fire tear her down, its her last time now
Girl:Sacrifice me...

The sacrifice is me...

Girl:The sacrifice is me
Lad:It's her
Girl:It's me
Lad:It's her
Girl:The sacrifice is me... THE SACRIFICE IS ME

[Chorus]
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Sacrifice her and no one else, hear her
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Take her down and condemn her of her sins
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Watch the fire tear her down, its her last time now
Girl:Sacrifice me...
Sacrifice me
Lad:Sacrifice her and no one else, hear her
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Take her down and condemn her of her sins
Girl:Sacrifice me
Lad:Watch the fire tear her down, its her last time now
Girl:Sacrifice me... the sacrifice is me...

[Church music]
Girl:Take me down
Show me how
Bring on fire
Last time now
This is me
Show me the way
Take me down
Last time now...

[Hogso]

Lookin good! I always thought that dual male/female lead vocals were awesome :)

[Thaxul]

Originally posted by Hogso
Lookin good! I always thought that dual male/female lead vocals were awesome :)

one good example is the pixies! :p

great song mysty!

[Mysty]

Thanxs everyone... I'm feelin kinda random tonight, so i have decided to post one of my fave songs

002: Suicidal Love

[Verse One]
I'm standing on this bridge
But I ain't ready to jump yet
I ain't suicidal

I'm waiting with this knife to my heart
But I ain't ready to use it
I ain't suicidal

Why aren't you here?
Do you even care?
Are you even there?
Is this a matter of your life or my death
Will you please save me...

[Chorus]
Why, at this breaking point your not here
To stop me as i prepare to fall down...
WOuld i be frozen in my fear
Would I be scared to disappear from you
Do I walk the plank,
Do I use the knife
Must I scream in pain so you'll see me
Or should i die

[Verse Two]
I've a hand of those old damn drugs
And even thought they look appealing
I ain't suicidal... yet

I'm lingering a top this tower too tall
Half me want's to jump, the other don't wanna fall
I ain't suicidal...yet

[Chorus]
Why, at this breaking point your not here
To stop me as i prepare to fall down...
WOuld i be frozen in my fear
Would I be scared to disappear from you
Do I walk the plank,
Do I use the knife
Must I scream in pain so you'll see me
Or should i die

(slower:piano music)
Now I'm falling
Now I'm bleeding
Now I'm seeing
Thinking, believing
CAn you help me
Is this dreaming
Thought not, believing
Your not here now

Now...I'm...

[Page]

So Mysty's a great artist *and* can write great songs?!
Cool.

[Mysty]

Originally posted by Page
So Mysty's a great artist *and* can write great songs?!
Cool.

Lolz... they're not that great...lolz^^ I guess I'm just creative!!! XD

New song...AND ITS THE BIG 10... lolz...the tenth song i've written anywayz... and compared to others, its very mellow...

010 Tonight

Dark nights
Stars in the sky
And you hold my hand
Look after me tight
Tonight
I don't ever want to let you go
Take me
And show me where I have to go

Now I feel safe once again
I don't wanna be alone again
And now I know
Does my fear still show
You take it away
You take my hand and show me where to go

Cold nights
Chills fill the air
and your warmth
Holds me closer to your chest
Tonight
I don't ever wanna let you go
Hold me
I promise to be you own

Now I feel safe once again
I don't wanna be alone again
And now I know
Does my fear still show
You take it away
You take my hand and show me where to go

As it starts to get late
The closer we make
The night become ours
We're alone
And the moonlight shines
On both of our smiles
As we get close
Our arms intertwined
The night can only tell
What will happen...

Now I feel safe once again
I don't wanna be alone again
And now I know
Does my fear still show
You take it away
You take my hand
And you hold me close
Please never let me go
As we kiss, in the light
Of diamonds and the night sky.

[Thaxul]

very good, mysty, as always... :D

[Mysty]

Originally posted by Thaxul
very good, mysty, as always... :D

lolz...thankyou...

[Ruri-Ruri]

wow, thats really good mysty!

[Mysty]

Originally posted by Ruri-Ruri
wow, thats really good mysty!

Thankies, I'm glad you like...i'll try to post a new one 2moz...XD

[THEDEVIL]

id liek to hear it to music lol

[Mysty]

Originally posted by THEDEVIL
id liek to hear it to music lol

lolz... i wanna hear it to music too...someday maybe...

[blackkite]

im thinking of writing a song...but now i feel...umm...how do you say?...intimidated...
Anyway, there good...and do you have to die when you pos something...im fed up of giving you phoenix downs and casting life!
plus...do you know what notes should go with each part?

i could do the keyboard bit!
i can do it but you have to keep it simple...(c,d,e,f,g) lol

[Mysty]

i dont have a clue what notes go with the songs... but you can make some up i guess... i just write them... and sing them when i feel kinda...alone, ya know...

and dont be intimidated, just write stuff, it helps...

i wont be postin much for a while... gotta a lot of stuff on...i'll post new stuff after xmas...if u can wait that is!;)